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Friday, May 29, 2020
Thorny Devil Report Writing
This is my report on the Thorny Devil. It was fun to research. I got my information from some National Geographic videos online. Have you heard of the Thorny Devil?
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Hi Jayde
ReplyDeleteThis is a great piece of writing. I haven't heard of a Thorny Devil. I would love to know what one looks like. I like how you have put your information into paragraphs with sub-headings. It makes it easy to follow.
I look forward to reading your next piece of writing.
Hello Jayde this was a very informative piece of writing, After reading this I learnt more about the "Thorny Devil" and they sound quite adorable (in my defence every lizard is cute), I very much enjoyed reading this and i look forward to your next bit of writing as well!
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