Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, September 25, 2020
Bigfoot
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ReplyDeleteI think the overall piece of writing is great and has good reasons for why the "bigfoot" isn't real,though I think you wrote about the evidence so you might need to cut that down a bit and maybe add a paragraph about if people from your class believe its true and add a small graph at the end.
ReplyDeleteOn the bright side I think your blog was really informative, and neat!
keep up the good work and have a nice holiday :)